10 STEPS TO BETTER PRESS RELEASES

1993 the Dream Merchant

When promoting your new product or business, the name of the game is: Exposure. For years, entrepreneurs and business professionals have relied on a simple, but often misunderstood promotion technique--the press release.

Although thousands of press releases are written and submitted each year, only a small percentage will ever see print. Why? Most editors are too busy to handle the extensive rewriting often required of most releases. But the chances of having your press release printed will be greatly improved if you follow a few simple steps in its preparation:

1. Use your letterhead. If an editor must search the remainder of the release to find your name and phone number, he may not bother.

2. Date the release at the top of the page and write "For Immediate Release" or a printing schedule near the date. This creates a sense of urgency, a feeling that your "news" is happening right now.

3. Double space the release. This allows room for editorial directions and changes.

4. Don't write more than 1-2 pages. Long releases will not normally be read.

5. Use a headline that portrays your product as "news." Instead of writing "Acme Introduces Bun Warmer to West Coast Marketplace" use "New Concept in Bun Warmers Explodes onto West Coast Scene."

6. Print the most important information first. Include the obvious benefits of your product (ease of use, low-cost, how it solves existing problems, etc.).

7. Include name and phone number of a contact person at the top of the page (top right). If the editor has further questions, he will then be able to contact a person familiar with the product or service you are promoting.

8. Use interesting, upbeat quotes from yourself or members of your staff. Quotes ease reading and heighten interest in your product or service.

9. Make sure all facts are accurate and up-to-date. If marketing strategies or cost factors change at the last minute, update the release. It is better to incur the cost of revising than to send out information that is inaccurate.

10. Address the release to an editor at the publication you have targeted. Most magazines and newspapers print a list of editorial employees in each issue. Otherwise, a simple phone call will usually result in a name you can contact.

These steps should eliminate much of the heartache involved in preparing and marketing press releases. A follow-up phone call to the editor within 10 business days may help your chance of publication even more.
Good luck!
Mike Foley, editor